Words to know
domain-specific vocabulary
Words that belong mainly to one subject or field, like viscosity in science or Confederation in history.
cohesive
Linked together smoothly, sentence to sentence, so listeners can follow.
coherent
Making sense as a whole: one clear main idea, in a logical order.
transition
A word or phrase that shows how ideas connect, like however, as a result or next.
reference
A word that points back to something already said, like it, they, this process.
given-to-new
A pattern where each sentence starts with something the listener already knows and ends with new information.
Remember from Grade 7
In Grade 7 you replaced vague words with precise ones, used adjectives and adverbs on purpose, varied your sentence types, made pronouns clear, used transitions, and chose the active or passive voice. Grade 8 adds two things: speaking with the domain-specific vocabulary of your subjects (the words experts use), and building sentences that are cohesive and coherent even when the topic is complex.
Let's start with two explanations
A student explains how a city cleans drinking water.
Version A: "So, the water goes in and they put stuff in it and it gets all clumpy and then it goes down and then they filter it and they add the other stuff and it's clean."
Version B: "Water from the lake is pumped into the treatment plant. First, the plant adds chemicals that make tiny particles stick together into clumps, called floc. Next, the floc sinks to the bottom of a tank; this step is called sedimentation. Then the water passes through filters of sand and gravel. Finally, the water is disinfected, often with chlorine or ultraviolet light, to kill germs."
Version B uses domain-specific words (floc, sedimentation, disinfected) and defines them. Its sentences are linked (First, Next, Then, Finally; the floc points back to clumps). You could draw the process from Version B. You couldn't from Version A.
Hands-on activityExpert explainer challenge
You need: a family member as your audience, a timer, paper and a pencil, and one object that connects to a subject (for example, a bottle of syrup and a glass of water for viscosity; a map for population density; a leaf for cells).
- Choose a topic from science, math, geography or history that you know well.
- Write three domain-specific words you'll use and a short definition for each.
- Plan your order with transitions (first, because, however, as a result, finally).
- Give a one-minute explanation using the object. Define each term the first time you use it.
- Your listener makes a tally: one mark for each domain word, one for each transition, and a star each time they get confused (for example, an unclear it).
- Ask your listener to say your main idea in one sentence. If they can't, revise and try again.
Safety: if you use food or liquids, do it over a tray or sink and clean up together.
What to look for: three domain-specific words, each defined on first use and used consistently; at least three transitions; clear references; and a listener who can sum up the main idea.