Words to know
precise
Exact; naming the specific thing or action instead of a general one.
domain-specific vocabulary
Words used mainly in one subject, such as biodiversity in science or rate of change in mathematics.
cohesive
Linked together: each sentence connects clearly to the one before it.
coherent
Making sense as a whole: all the sentences support one clear main idea.
filler
A sound or word that fills a gap without adding meaning: um, like, you know, basically.
repair
Fixing a confusing sentence while speaking: "Let me put that another way."
front-loading
Putting the main idea at the start of a sentence or explanation.
Remember from Grade 8
In Grade 8 you used domain-specific words in talks and defined them on first use, linked sentences with clear references and transitions (cohesion), and kept the whole talk focused on one main idea (coherence). In Grade 9 you have more subjects with their own vocabulary, and you'll be asked to explain things aloud in all of them: a lab result, a math solution, a geography case study. This lesson helps you speak as precisely as you'd write, while still sounding natural.
Let's start with two explanations
A student explains a science concept to the class.
Version A: "So basically the stuff from farms goes in the water and then, like, the green stuff grows a lot and it's bad for the fish and stuff."
Version B: "Fertilizer from farm fields can wash into lakes during heavy rain. These extra nutrients feed algae, which can grow into large blooms. When the algae die, bacteria break them down, and that process uses up oxygen in the water. As a result, fish may not have enough oxygen to survive."
Version B is longer but much clearer. It uses precise words (fertilizer, nutrients, algae, oxygen), each sentence connects to the one before, and it sticks to one chain of causes. It also has no fillers.
Precise and descriptive words
Vague words make listeners guess. Replace them:
- Vague nouns: stuff, thing, it → name it: fertilizer, the hypothesis, the main character.
- Weak verbs: goes, gets, does, makes → flows, absorbs, measures, causes.
- Empty intensifiers: really, very, super, so → a precise word or a detail: very cold → minus 30 with the wind chill.
- Descriptive details in stories: sensory details help listeners picture a scene: "The snow squeaked under our boots" is more vivid than "It was cold out."
The goal isn't the biggest word. It's the word that says exactly what you mean, for this audience.
Worked exampleLet's revise a spoken explanation
A student explains a math solution aloud: "So I did the thing where you, um, take the numbers and, like, the line goes up by 3 each time so it's that, and then you start at 5 so that's the other thing, so yeah, y = 3x + 5." Revise it to be precise, cohesive and coherent.
- Front-load the main point: "The equation of the relation is y = 3x + 5."
- Replace vague words with domain-specific ones: the line goes up by 3 each time → the rate of change is 3; you start at 5 → the initial value is 5.
- Link the sentences: use First, Next, So and repeat key terms.
- Cut fillers: remove um, like, so yeah, the thing.
- Check for the audience: classmates know these terms, but a quick definition helps anyone who is unsure.
"The equation of the relation is y = 3x + 5. First, I looked at how y changes: each time x increases by 1, y increases by 3, so the rate of change is 3. Next, I found the initial value, which is the value of y when x is 0. That value is 5. So the equation is y = 3x + 5."
Check your understandingQuiz
1. Which word is most precise?
2. Which is a domain-specific word from mathematics?
3. Which sentence links back to the previous one using a reference word? (Previous: Rain washed fertilizer into the stream.)
4. What is the best replacement for um when you need time to think?
5. A spoken explanation is coherent when:
6. Which sentence is easiest to follow aloud?